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Monthly Archives: July 2015

750-Word Flash Fiction

29 Wednesday Jul 2015

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Over the last couple of weeks I have been working on several flash fiction* pieces. These pieces which are all related and will be in a collection at some point are 750- words in length – about a page and a half. I have concluded that this word count is my perfect flash fiction length.

The flash fiction form brings many craft demands which are helpful for the developing fiction writer. Limiting yourself like this forces an economy of words that results in precise descriptions and transitions that must come from a character’s point of view.

Without this limitation you might allow a description to run on for three or four lines (50 or 75 words). You might even invite the reader to get lost in it. But here you must choose carefully what the reader will see, giving them the precise visual that will allow them to build the world you’ve left off-screen.

I have found that writing an omniscient third-person narrative overwhelms the form. These pieces are most successful when written from a character’s point of view, where the observations are by nature limited and intimate. Intimacy is a key to the form. It is not the place for grand, sweeping epics. I have in the past referred to flash fiction as prose photography (where the novel might be thought of as a feature film).

Each word is chosen for the weight it will carry, for its sensory value. Indeed, as I am putting the final touches on a piece I must look and see if I’ve hit the word count. And then I must go line by line through the piece strategically adding or removing words in the right places, careful not to over-write or weaken the delicate lattice of the story. It is a type of construction that reminds me of the work of poetry.

Investigate this form. Give it a shot. It has a great deal to offer you.

*Flash Fiction is a short, short-story form, a complete story that with a count of 2,000 words or less. Often much less. Perhaps the most famous flash fiction ever written is attributed to Ernest Hemingway: For sale: baby shoes, never worn. http://learning.blogs.nytimes.com/2013/10/03/short-and-sweet-reading-and-writing-flash-fiction/?_r=0

A Round-up…of Facts about the Daily Effort of Writing Fiction

15 Wednesday Jul 2015

Posted by davidjmarsh in Creative Process/Craft, Qualities of Good Fiction, Writing Discipline

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If after a few attempts a particular sentence or section is not working, delete it. Following this maxim has never let me down. The remaining text has never suffered in the absence of the troubling material.

Good writing only comes of bad writing. There is no shortcut to successful prose. Thinking, outlining, discussing, researching, scheduling, obtaining instruction – these are all necessary, but they don’t result in functional paragraphs on a page. Only through writing do we arrive at a draft manuscript. Bad writing is not something to be avoided. It is something to be accomplished with the knowledge that it is the gateway to good writing.

Try writing from a challenging POV*. I recently wrote a short short story (flash fiction) from the perspective of a character that dies half-way through the narrative. And then I maintained that POV for the rest of the story. No POV should be considered off-limits. Such decisions often lead to more imaginative story because they cause the writer to think differently.
Especially try this if a story is coming off flat.

Action is the result of character A trying to get something from character B that character B doesn’t want to give up. It doesn’t have to be a big thing; it just has to be some thing. In order for there to be action there must be reaction. Agreement between characters is not action and won’t result in story – no matter how interesting the agreement might be.

*Point of View – the perspective from which the story is being revealed. Might be a character or a narrator. Might be 1st or 3rd person, close or omniscient, etc.

Five Myths of Creative Writing #5

01 Wednesday Jul 2015

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The Myth: You write best when you feel moved to do so, when you are inspired. You don’t really have any control over when you’ll produce good writing.

This is a lie. This is an excuse for those who lack discipline. This is something people say who don’t write. This is what people say who are in love with the idea of writing.
Listen to me. All you have to do is write every day*. If you will do this one simple thing you will find that the process will, in due time, produce good writing. After writing every day for a year and after your fifth draft you will see that in fact you do control when you produce good writing. You control it by putting your rump in the chair every single day.
I have never felt like writing except when I’ve been writing. I can think of 100 other things I’d rather do than sit down to write. I know what is in store for me in the discipline and in the process of draft after draft. It is lonely and slow going. But here’s the thing…it works. The process delivers. Confidence in the daily process – this is what motivates me to write every day. Not some abstract inspiration. Not a muse – whatever the dickens that is. Not some highfalutin artistic sensibility.

The Truth: You’ll write best when you do it every day. That is what will result in your best work. Lots and lots of writing is what produces good writing.

*And read. Don’t neglect reading good and great writing. If you’re not a reader you can’t be a writer. The two cannot be separated. Ever meet a musician who never goes to a show?

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