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Quote and Comment, L’Amour

04 Wednesday May 2022

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Start writing, no matter what. The water does not flow until the faucet is turned on. – Louis L’Amour

This is plain and simple advice. And the starting point for every one of us. If a writer doesn’t start, there there is no progress. Writing is a matter of will. Writing isn’t like watching television or sleeping in. Writing isn’t passive. The writer has to initiate the action. The writer has to start.

Anything we do that has lasting positive impact requires such initiative. 

Note too that L’Amour says “no matter what.” It doesn’t matter if you feel inspired, have the time,  or it’s your birthday—”start writing, no matter what.” I don’t think he’s speaking solely of the initial start, but also that daily start as well—that daily effort of getting to work.

But, in all this work, there is a reward. “…the faucet is turned on.” Writing begets writing. Productivity is the result of having initiative and doing the work. You’ll see L’Amour makes no statement here on quality. The water (writing) that comes may be lukewarm, hard with minerals, or crisp and clear. That’s not the focus. The focus here is to ensure the water is flowing. The quality of the water? Let it flow for a while and we’ll see what happens.

Quote and Comment, Bradbury

24 Wednesday Mar 2021

Posted by davidjmarsh in Creative Process/Craft, Qualities of Good Fiction, Quote and Comment, Ray Bradbury, Reading as a Writer

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Read poetry every day of your life. Poetry is good because it flexes muscles you don’t use often enough. Poetry expands the senses and keeps them in prime condition. 

Ray Bradbury

Over ten years ago I read my first book by Billy Collins, Ballistics. Since then, I’ve consistently had a book of poetry in my reading stack. While I don’t think Bradbury was necessarily aiming his comment at writers, reading poetry has impacted me creatively in a variety of ways. More specifically, I believe it’s had a positive impact on my prose––especially my novel in progress.

As Bradbury states, it builds muscles that might ordinarily get little or no attention. 

So exactly what does poetry bring?

Reading poetry brings new perspective to sentence length, word choice, and euphony––the music or rhythm in poetry. It brings awareness of how the prose looks on the page and how it reads aloud. It reinforces the importance of ending a paragraph with the penultimate phrase, or starting a paragraph with an image that demands the reader’s attention. Good narrative poetry provides insight into how to tell a story, when to be a minimalist, when to be an impressionist, and how concrete details––the right concrete details––can bring an unmatched realism.

Perhaps you don’t have any poetry on your shelf and don’t know where to start. Consider picking up a copy of Mark Lilley’s debut, Lucky Boy. Or start where I did, with Ballistics. Perhaps read through the Psalms in the Bible––a collection of ancient Hebrew poetry. Follow Bradbury’s advice. You’ll be glad you did.

Quote and Comment, Butler

17 Tuesday Apr 2018

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In her essay “Furor Scribendi” Octavia Butler wrote: “First forget inspiration. Habit is more dependable. Habit will sustain you whether you’re inspired or not. Habit will help you finish and polish your stories. Inspiration won’t. Habit is persistence in practice.”

This is the truth of writing, the unglamorous, dull truth.
When I got out of bed to write at 5AM this morning it was not inspiration that lifted me from my slumber. It was brute force, the decision again today to push myself down the path of habit. It is in this – taking action, establishing routine – that we get work done. I don’t believe in The Muse. Work is not mysterious. It is cause and effect. Here we have the craft of writing, not the art. Oh, and one more thing. Inspiration comes during perspiration. Inspiration is not the fuel that starts the effort, it is a residue that comes, sometimes, in a flash of delight. It is a gift.
Now, get to work.

Quote and Comment, Robinson

21 Wednesday Mar 2018

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Marilynne Robinson wrote in the New York Times Book Review on 24 Sept. 2017: “Writing should always be exploratory. There shouldn’t be the assumption that you know ahead of time what you want to express. When you enter into the dance with language, you’ll begin to find that there’s something before, or behind, or more absolute than the thing you thought you wanted to express. And as you work, other kinds of meaning emerge than what you might have expected. It’s like wrestling with the angel: On the one hand you feel the constraints of what can be said, but on the other hand you feel the infinite potential. There’s nothing more interesting than language and the problem of trying to bend it to your will, which you can never quite do. You can only find what it contains, which is always a surprise.”

True. Even if we do try, we try in vain to explain instead of explore. And every time we find it to be so, that whatever we imagined producing is altered by the act of putting it in language – which is always different, always something else, and always better than what we fancied our wits might conjure. It is indeed a delight to be one’s first reader.

What Jackson Said

20 Wednesday Nov 2013

Posted by davidjmarsh in Creative Process/Craft, Quote and Comment

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Here is something you need to know.

It is a quote that summarizes the creative process.

It describes what every writer, painter, composer, and creator of any type does every time they sit down to work.

It is clear, descriptive, and about the most precise instruction you will find anywhere.

Anything you might learn beyond this about how to do your thing is icing.

This is the fundamental construct.

 

Do something, then do something to that, then do something to that.      – Jackson Pollock

Of the Innumerable Effects

09 Wednesday Oct 2013

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Ben H. Winters said to us in a recent workshop, (my paraphrase) that a writer’s work is not to create stories, but rather to create certain feelings in a reader. The story – what happens – is very nearly irrelevant. Following is the best quote I have read lately on the craft of writing. It is about the decisions a writer must make. The decisions regarding what goes onto the page, and tremendously more importantly, what is left off. The decisions we make that shape the reader’s experience.

Of the innumerable effects or impressions of which the heart, the intellect or (more generally) the soul is susceptible, what one shall I, on the present occasion select?

Edgar Allen Poe – “The Philosophy of Composition” 1846

Chinese Roast Duck

10 Wednesday Apr 2013

Posted by davidjmarsh in Quote and Comment

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Singing songs like the ‘The Man I Love’ or ‘Porgy’ is no more work than sitting down and eating Chinese roast duck, and I love roast duck.    – Billie Holiday

This is where we want to be, isn’t it? No matter whether we are writing, running, in a meeting at work, making cheesecake, or practicing our piano, we want to be where Billie was when she was singing – eating it up!

So how do we do this?

1. Identify your Chinese roast duck. What is that thing that you love?

2. Withhold judgment about that thing you love. Unless it is immoral or unethical or will hurt you or others, it doesn’t matter what anyone else thinks about it or whether it will make money.

3. Make the decision that your Chinese roast duck is going to be a central focus of your life. It’s OK, go ahead, make it a central focus.

4. Eat your Chinese roast duck every single day. Do not go to bed without having eaten your roast duck. Treat it as if it is the one thing you have to do in order to stay alive.

[Your thing here] is no more work than sitting down and [your favorite food here], and I love [your favorite food here].      – [Your name here]

More Than I Can Chew

10 Wednesday Oct 2012

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“If I have the belief that I can do it, I shall surely acquire the capacity to do it even if I may not have it at the beginning.” – Mahatma Gandhi

In the dictionary of idioms, if you look up ‘biting off more than you can chew’, there will be a picture of me sitting with my laptop writing my book. (Maybe in your dictionary the picture is of you – writing, planning your own business, on a treadmill.) Many of us have story ideas that are large and unwieldy and beyond our immediate, possessed capabilities. We write armed only with the knowledge we gained yesterday and a hope for what might be known tomorrow.

There is an oasis to which we must return over and over along the way – the pool of simple belief that we can indeed do it. It is a blind belief. We may not be capable, yet, but capability will come with the course. Capability breeds capability. It is only after we have accomplished a task that we have the skill and ability to do it. This is the difference between doing something the first time and doing it the second time. This is the way-station on the road to mastery. It is in doing that we become.

Make Your Life Hard, Not Harder

01 Wednesday Aug 2012

Posted by davidjmarsh in Quote and Comment, Writing Life

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Life is hard; it’s harder if you’re stupid.   – John Wayne

So, I don’t know what the context was under which Wayne said this, or if he said it at all, but the truth of it is evident a dozen times each day. You don’t have to look much beyond the tip of your nose to see Wayne’s axiom played out in bold, brutal detail by people you know and by people you don’t.

But, when you are working to refine a craft, ignorance (if you’ll allow me to use this word as well) is the shoe lace, the missed step in the flight, the stubbed toe which leads to all manner of frustration, anger, cursing, and sometimes quitting.

It is hard work for accomplished, professional, highly skilled writers to write. And, when you are none of these things – when you have been at your craft for a couple of weeks or a couple of years – your empty head only makes matters worse.

So – buckle up, here comes the point – if you are trying to practice a craft, get some sort of an education. Don’t make life as hard as it can possibly be. Get hooked in to a good writers group (make sure it is one lead by someone for whom life is only hard, not harder), read some well respected instruction on the craft*, or go take a class at the local university. Take some decisive steps toward removing your ignorance and your risk of stupidity. Do something to make your life hard, not harder. Then proceed. Write every day. Know that you’ve done all you can.

*For recommendations see my 14 March 2012 posting. If you’ve read that one, read Lamott’s “Bird by Bird”.  If you’ve read that one go directly to the second to last sentence of this post. If you are doing that then point me to your blog so that I can learn from you.

All Manner of Travesties

18 Wednesday Jul 2012

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There is no way of achieving true form without opening possibilities of all manner of travesties.

– Avivah Gottlieb Zornberg

One does not typically go to a theological text looking for writing advice. It’s no secret that such texts are not easy reading and are not concerned with creative craft. Both are true for Zornberg. This quote is from her book about Genesis. She makes it while discussing God’s acts of creation. But, when I read it I was stunned by its application to the craft of writing, its encouragement of first drafts – of first drafts of first paragraphs.

In fact, this may be the best principle, the best guidance for a first draft that I have ever read. It is critical that a writer get his or her head around the truth of this statement.

Anne Lamott* refers to the value of really crappy first drafts. Same thing. The first draft, the “opening possibilities” is the first step toward writing what readers will joyfully read. It is the only first step. There is no other starting place – not thinking, not talking about it, not reading, not plot outlining, not research – “true form” will result from none of these.

“All manner of travesties” are in store for the craftsman. This is good news. This means he has started, the dust unsettled.

 

*Assuming you have read “The War of Art” by Pressfield, you should now read “Bird by Bird” by Lamott. By ‘now’ I don’t mean this week or next, I mean as soon as possible after you read this last word.

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