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Backstory Isn’t Story

20 Wednesday Apr 2016

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You will try to make your reader care about the character you’ve created. You’ll do this by telling your reader all about the character’s background, family, where he lives, his personality, clothing, job, and who knows what else. You’ll lay all of this out for your reader in great detail. You’ll do this at the top of the first page. You’ll do this before you tell them the story. You’ll do this because they have to know. They have to know all of this before they can appreciate what you have to tell them.

Go ahead. Do this. Tell them all of it.

Now, delete it.

There. You’ve gotten that out of your system.

Now start again. Show the reader your character in the heat of the moment, dealing with conflict, caught in the middle of some action. Do this starting in the first sentence.
Do this well and your reader will care about the character you’ve created while knowing nothing else.

How do we know that this is true? We know because before we were writers we were readers. And this is why we care about characters. This is why we’ve cared about characters for years.

If you still want proof, go to the library and check out Cormac McCarthy’s No Country for Old Men.
You’ll meet Llewelyn Moss at the top of page one hunting antelope. It will not be until page 20 that you’ll find out he lives in a trailer with a woman. And even then you won’t know anything else, except they aren’t part of the social elite and Moss isn’t a sissy. On page 12 Moss will find a bunch of dead guys and on page 17 he will find another dead guy and a bag full of cash. And this stuff matters. It matters because back on page one, during the hunt, you started caring about this guy. You didn’t start caring on page 20.

As Ben H. Winters said over lunch on March 10, 2016 at LePeep’s on 71st St. in Indianapolis – always put backstory in later, and if possible, never.

The Willing Suspension of Disbelief

04 Wednesday Nov 2015

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When a reader picks up a novel and begins to read, there is an unspoken agreement that occurs. The reader agrees to accept what she reads as fact. And this agreement remains in place for the duration of the dream the author has created.
The willing suspension of disbelief is a concept I learned in high school theater. It has been around forever and is a foundational fact of how we consume stories. Without this uniquely human capability, all fiction in writing, film, and on the stage would fall flat. We would interrogate everything we read and saw. We’d be constantly preoccupied – tethered to an ongoing argument about whether or not what is being presented to us is a truth or a lie. Fortunately, we don’t think in these terms…when we decide not to. In fact, we are able to tease truth out of a story and learn about ourselves and our lives from events and circumstances that are not themselves real.
While this concept seems complicated, we don’t actively suspend our disbelief. We do it without even thinking about it. This is the joy of reading.
However, as writers we must realize that the dream is fragile. The willing suspension our readers have granted us is always at risk. We must tend to it, keep it propped up. Our reader is willing, but we must support them in their effort.
When crafting the story, don’t grab the reader’s attention and wake them from their disbelief. Watch that your characters stay in character on and off stage. Be sure not to force the story. Let it wander where it will. And here is the test. If the story you are writing doesn’t cause you to slip into the dream, then it will not support your reader’s willing suspension of disbelief either.
The goal is simple. You want your readers to suspend their disbelief as often and for as long as possible.

The Reader as a Silent Observer

21 Wednesday Oct 2015

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There is an element in writing fiction that is invisible to readers (if the craftsman is successful) but is at the very heart of the process for writers.
As we write there are decisions to be made at every turn – thousands of them both large and small. Among these decisions are several significant ones of approach – what to reveal to the reader, what to reveal to the various characters, and what to reveal to all involved?*
We know that the reader will only be truly satisfied if they know more than the characters do about what is happening on the page. The reader is always in the room and wants the inside scoop. The writer had better not forget to treat the reader as the silent, ever-present observer.
Here is an example. If I want to focus a reader’s attention or emotions more on one character than another, that character needs to open up and become vulnerable to the reader. This will be most effective if this character is then also guarded toward the other characters. This will make the reader feel like they are inside the story, a part of what is happening on the page.
So there is craft to be done. We must ensure that the reader is kept central to the telling of the story. And we must all the while make sure the reader doesn’t see us on-stage managing the illusion.

*There are other aspects of the story – contexts, histories, maybe even motivations and relationships – that don’t make it onto the page at all. The writer must know more of the story than ends up on the page, otherwise the story will feel flimsy and lacking in depth.

What Your Reader Cannot Possibly Know

27 Wednesday Feb 2013

Posted by davidjmarsh in Contract with the Reader, Creative Process/Craft

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What you don’t know as a writer, your reader has no hope of knowing.

I will sometimes see phrases in stories like “her hair was sort of a sandy brown” or “Tommy didn’t know what to think about the strange man” or “At this point even I don’t know where I’m going to go.” This last one is a real line from a story I recently read. It is the last line in the story. Yikes.

Any time a character doesn’t know something it is because the author doesn’t know either. When the author doesn’t know or hasn’t stopped long enough or thought deeply enough to know, he or she will often write these kinds of sentences. I know. I have done it. When we do write these sentences we think we are being subtle or insightful. We aren’t. We are blowing our reader’s focus and enjoyment – if we’ve been graceful enough to earn it to begin with.

Your reader will stumble over these kinds of statements. Your reader will be frustrated. There is a lot your reader doesn’t know. They don’t need to read a book to find that out. Your reader wants definitive, conflict-ridden judgments, observations, and exclamations. Your reader doesn’t want to hear or see a character stumbling around in wonderment. That is what real humans do, not successful characters in stories. Successful characters know what they are thinking and how they feel. And they are written by authors who do too.

Slow, But That’s OK

20 Wednesday Jun 2012

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I spent most of an hour one morning earlier this week re-keying two pages of my current manuscript. Two pages – double spaced Arial ten font. I am always surprised how, once I’ve worked for a while, I look back and see so little on the page…two pages after 60 minutes at the keys. And here’s the thing, the thing every writer has to deal with: what I’ve spent an hour on (much, much more if you include past drafts, editing, and rewriting), my reader will spend one minute – maybe two if they are slow like me – reading.

I like to think the human mind is powerful and will pick up on, in that one or two minutes, mistakes made over those hours of labor. I also like to think that when I have done the writing especially well, the mind of my reader will take notice and the words will fly – as I have intended – like arrows off my bow, lodging deep in their experience. But the fact is that my reader, bless them for it, will zip over these hand-crafted sentences like a beagle after a squirrel. They will notice only the most course characteristics of the terrain under their paws.

Writing is an intricate and slow, very slow, craft. In this fact of my reader’s speed over my own, I think I may have finished coming to grips with this innate slowness. My readers will not pour over my writing like I have. But, they will read it! Some of them will read it and a few may even see some of the more difficult moves I’ve made. If they think upon any of it for even that minute or two, what more can I dare to ask?

Why Readers Read

29 Wednesday Feb 2012

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The best stories take a turn at some point, early on. There lies some element, a phrase, a texture, that strikes the reader as so human, so emotionally charged and distant from the intellect, that a switch is thrown, disbelief is suspended, and the label “fiction” falls away. The characters stand up off the page and the story at that very point becomes part of where the reader has been.

It is at this intersection that the story becomes forever a part of the reader, producing the same chemistry and cementing the same memories as fact. This is why readers read. (And this is why writers write.) This is the gold. This is what they (we) crave. This act of reading, silently, alone, holds the potential of altering one’s experience.

Unlike TV or film, there is something that happens when we actively construct meaning from strings of letters. Words are produced that alter our soul’s catalogue, carve out who we are, and keep us coming back for more. dm

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